After reviewing my animation with my peer, the feedback that was given was mostly positive. The feedback given pointed out that in the animation there was good detail such as the rolling eyes of the bagel so that it would create a greater sense of realism, and that there is a clear understanding of the storyline in a short time period of 30 seconds.
The criticism given stated that the text at the beginning of the animation did not fit with the hand drawn theme of the animation as I had used text to create them, and that the transitions from a few of the scenes were too jumpy.
Warburtons – Animation Assignment
Thursday 9th June
- 9.30 – 10.30: Annotate Tasks
- 11 – 12.30: Add catagories to all tasks
- 1.30 – 3.00: Change text on animation
- 3.30 – 5.00: Re-upload animation to Youtube
Evening (at home)
- Task1: Begin scanning drawings/sketches
- Task2: Complete scanning and upload drawings onto wordpress
Friday 10th June
- Hour 1 task: Add to Evaluation
- Hour 2 task: Finish Evaluation
Tutorial: Submission sheets, Submit assignment (incl Sketchbooks).